Over the past few weeks we have been trialing a new approach to writing after a fantastic professional development session last term. The children have been given an opportunity to select the topics they want to write about. Once they have finished the children work in a one to one situation to edit their work. Below are some samples of the amazing writing our students produced today we hope you enjoy reading them.
I hope you enjoy reading the children’s first attempts to write a short story.
The Little Kitten by Hayley
Once there was a girl called Lucy she lived all be herself . One day she heard a strange noise coming from the bushes, it was a kitten and she was lost. So Lucy took her inside the house and she gave the little kitten food everyday. But the little kitten got sick so Lucy took her to the vet so the vet people could fix her all up. Lucy took the little kitten home.
Lucy looked in the letter box to see if there was a letter. There was a letter and it was about a pet competition for the cutest pet ever. Lucy’s pet won .
Every time Lucy got sausages the little kitten would bounce up on her and get the sausages. They became best friends forever.
The Train Station by Liam
Once upon a time a kid called Jack went to a train station. He saw the train coming but he fell on to the track. The Metro train driver turned on his emergency brakes and he stopped just in time.
The ambulance came and people came to see if Jack was OK. Luckily he didn’t break any of his bones. Jack was always careful near trains and he lived happily ever after.
Creeper the Dwarf by Max
Once upon a time there was a dwarf named Creeper. He lived in a cave.
He liked to hunt, but one day he lost his axe. He looked everywhere in his cave. But when we looked under his bed, there was his axe!
He lived happily ever after.
Poor Dopey! by Harper
Once upon a time there was a dwarf named Dopey. He had a purple hat and a squeaky clown nose. He lived in a cave in the woods. He loves to hunt for treasure. He is cute and he is clumsy.
But one sunny day all of the dwarves were at work. Dopey bumped into the door. He fell sideways and fell into a hole! He called for help but nobody came. He stayed there all night.
The next morning Dopey was sad. He could not do anything except call. One day, one of Dopey’s friends saw him and fetched the others. They all helped him out.